Thursday, June 7, 2012

Poetry Form Week 38 on Zeno, By Raivenne-Lations


Zeno Poems by Raivenne-lations

Poem 1: Of Plans And Raivenne  

Plans change and now my day is free
To vegetate?
No not
I.

Shades await this
bluest
sky.

I must enjoy
This gift,
Bye!


Poem 2: Word

Oh I would not call this thing love,
much too simple.
Then what?
Word.
We’re talking love.
Our love.
Word…?
This love is ours,
Always.
Word!


Zeno poem (Ten lines with the syllable count: 8/4/2/1/4/2/1/4/2/1 and a rhyme scheme: a/b/c/d/e/f/d/g/h/d),


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4 comments:

Iris Yacht Murphy said...

very interesting form.

Rinkly Rimes said...

http://rinklyrimes.blogspot.com.au/2012/06/madness.html

Not easy! It nearly drove me mad!

Helen Shang Obama said...

Thanks for trying it out,

Rinkly Rimes.

raivenne said...

Why thank you for featuring my words as the examples. What a pleasant surprise!

Look forward to seeing others tackle it.