Sunday, March 4, 2012

Poetry Picnic Week 26: Seven Deadly Sins



Welcome to Jingle Poetry @ Olive Garden Poetry Picnic Week 26, 

Last week's poetry picnic was a GREAT one, where the Jingle Poetry Community has had a great opportunity to learn and share poetry on military, ... and we officials at the poetry picnic are happy about the response that You give us. Thank you very much.
This week is going to be very interesting too as we are going to touch upon seven deadly sins, well, everyone got a few, let’s spend some time self checking, or peer picking. Take a sin and study about it, then write what you think of it…Read the samples below, then join us...

THE SEVEN ENLIGHTENMENT'S by JamieDedes  

Luxuria

Shop ’till you drop
And lusting the night away
What emptiness filled?

Gula

Stuffing down dinner
Eating when you’re not hungry
Emotions packed

Avaritia

Must have and more
Never enough when feeling less
Running on empty

Acedia

Ah, discouragement
No faith in God or in Man
Swim in depression

Ira

Wence comes this rage
And hatred is your hallmark
Angry with your Self

Invidia

Other’s good brings low
In your backpack, jealousy
Feeling valueless

Superbia

Arrogance and pride
Heavy indeed your burden
Narcissistic you

Greed by Shan  

On plush leather chairs,
And air conditioned avarice,
They sit and decide our fates.
These suits.
These hierophants of etiquette.
Below in the streets,
People fight for aid sent
from overseas.
They throw money at the armed
well muscled guard.
Begging,
Mercy,
My child is ill.
My family starves.
Coffee is served.
With ginger biscuits.
Ties are loosened,
And money exchanged.
Not pennies,
Like below.
Uncomfortable laughter.
As consciousness
becomes a figment
and a bank balance.
A memory.

Patterns by u keep moving forward  

I only write because I am
Tired and too weak to resist;
Otherwise I would push
The swollen part of myself
Back down to the core of me
And let it marinate,
Waiting for the sweet air
Of expression to connect
With it, allowing the fully
Flavored pain to explode onto
Paper, soaking through
Layer after layer as
The pen presses harder
Against the resisting desk,
Trying to break it apart
With frenzied stabs
And strokes.
I pull the pen back,
Dip it in the
Pure oxygenated blood of my heart, and let
It drip across
The page in random patterns.

Armani Pride by Chris G.                 

Armani, sir, don’t you mind
The scales underneath the silk—
My tongue is worth a hundred souls,
My pen a thousand more.
The world, my throne, self-carved—
I think mere mortal knowing
Might yet be deigned to see
Some tracest memory
Of wealth, innumerable, that lies
Within this fairest grace.
-
Before the pride, yet rides The Fall,
One-winged angel recompense
With Hell and Fire resolute
This passion, wild, divine
Will never bow nor know
Another master but its own—
Smile through the pain,
For you and thee are nothing but
This maddened laughter spouts
From believer, know er, all.
-
Cast me down, you break me down,
It is of your own pathetic drives—
Kill it, beat it, des-e-crate it,
Such a base begotten crave
Of jealousy, and ranched salivation
Of those below the knowing
Of this manicured salvation—
All I need, the dollar, plastered
Forming yet eternal
The foundations of my history.

Seven Deadly Sins by Emmanuel Ibok  

 On the high throne
the judge sits
about to pass verdict
for sins commit.
Her name is called
and I’m the issue
“Remember when you lied?”
the Judge counted
“promised you’ll love him
deceive him to believe
cheat on him in secrecy
lavish his cash
file a divorce
and took all his wealth
Remember?”
She tried to plead
like it was a sin
she inherited
not one she committed
but the verdict
had been concluded
and a seven deadly sins count
was charged against her
for my useful life
she rendered useless
still
my life could not be
restored
as my body slept
peacefully in its casket
and my soul taking flight.



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Please share your poetry, comment below and read some very talented artists and have fun!

Week 27 Theme: Rain, Spring Break, My Favorite Color, First Kiss       


Have fun writing...!

1. Shawn Pen: Thanks for Being Supportive!  44. tigercity  87. patience needed  130. Ankoku Hikaru  
2. welkin siskin  45. Joann/ Into Stillness  88. Mark Butkus  131. Belva@MainelyMugUps  
3. Michelle Kwan: The Figure Ice Skating Queen  46. FireandIce  89. a fun connection  132. Peter sherwood: The Soulful Leader  
4. Selfless Love Is Divine!  47. Crayfish  90. parth joshi  133. Twitter.com: It Is birds chirping  
5. Taylor  48. JamieDedes  91. on Jamie Dedes  134. Kodjo Deynoo  
6. Simran Kaur  49. JamieDedes  92. Meredith Blecha  135. Journey To Eternity  
7. Mouth  50. SEED of LIFE  93. Erick Flores  136. Britney Spears: My Favorite Pop Singer  
8. Craig Watson  51. Lynnaima  94. XiaoMoLiHua  137. parth joshi  
9. Craig Watson  52. Vanity  95. Tonya Harris  138. Dawn  
10. Steven Federle  53. Lynnaima  96. Nelson  139. Dr. Alan Noell: He Is Extremely Pro...  
11. Funnygirllola  54. marit  97. jhpoetry  140. Dr. Wang Yanqiu Is Very Easy To Work With!  
12. Steven Federle  55. Rinkly Rimes  98. Michael Jordan  141. Yao Ming: The Special Basketball Star  
13. Steven Federle  56. Pride  99. Helen Obama  142. Ziyi Zhang: The Movie Star With A Heart!  
14. Steven Federle  57. Nicole Wian  100. GJK  143. Popular Science: The Fantastic figure on Science  
15. dakshi  58. Seabell  101. Anthony F. Rando  144. Steven Federle  
16. Abby  59. Mark  102. Black Love  145. Dawn  
17. Quaz  60. Luna  103. Angelina  146. Princess in London: She Adds Charm and Beauty  
18.  iBeingMe  61. Luna  104. The Wall Street Journal  147. Asya Pritsker: The Charming Cuckoo  
19. mm  62. K. Shawn Edgar  105. Broken melody  148. Jennifer Aniston: The Lady Purity  
20. iBeingMe  63. K. Shawn Edgar  106. Shawn Bird  149. Panama Project from Northwestern University  
21. Asim Kumar Paul  64. K. Shawn Edgar  107. Steven Federle  150. Barbara Bush and Jenna Hager  
22. booguloo  65. robin  108. Gerardine Baugh  151. Bristo Palin: Princess of love and Bravery  
23. booguloo  66. Shoeless~Vain  109. veronica diMarco  152. Jintao Hu: PLease Open Your Doors for Talks  
24. gautami tripathy  67. Twine  110. Lipstick on the Mirror  153. Tiger Woods: The King of Golf  
25. gautami tripathy  68. ankush  111. veronica diMarco  154. Peter Willow: The Taxi-Driver Who Delivers Love  
26. Tigerbrite  69. Sherrie Theriault  112. Jerry Bona: We Honor Your Friendship  155. Super Cao Nguyen: Founder to Academic All-State Wi  
27. Neha's Journal  70. Sherrie Theriault  113. Oklahoma Youth Orchestra: The American Eagle  156. Yao And Yuan Pen: The Cousins Who Truly Care!  
28. Richard King Perkins II  71. Andy  114. To Julie and Sandy  157. Jackie Chan: The Superman to Kungfu Movies!  
29. Meena Somasundaram  72. Christopher Raley  115. I Love You, Asian Grandpa!  158. Amy Tan: The Most Inspiring Asian American Writer  
30. Mark  73. Mcfly  116. To Mom's Dad: You Are A Magical Dream Waver!  159. Vicki Zhao: The Diamond Chinese Movie Star!  
31. anjum wasim dar  74. McFly  117. Introduction to Myth: Siren and Cephalopod  160. Aihua Xie: The Powerful Thinker in Physics  
32. shail  75. McFly  118. To Justin's Grandpa: Life Was Hard, You Survive!  161. Dr. Tao Li from Boston College  
33. James Rainsford  76. Janaki Nagaraj  119. IrenetheBean  162. Emma Watson: Charming Princess in Harry Potter  
34. Kate Snape  77. Chimnese  120. You Deserve Fame, Waystationone  163. Ruby Lin: Her Beauty Is Powerful  
35. life in a poem  78. Ramesh Sood  121. Deborah: You Are Special  164. Steven Federle  
36. Miss Kitten  79. CC Champagne (Envy The Green Eyed Dragon)  122. Bradley Peraino: The Wounded Worrier Project Hero!  165. Steven Federle  
37. Terri  80. Daydreamertoo  123. on Steven Federle  166. Beijing University: The Best In China  
38. Matthew John Davies  81. Kodjo Deynoo  124. On Poets and Officials (Taylor)  167. Beijing Wuzi University: I Miss My Time There!!!  
39. blitzken  82. Kodjo Deynoo  125. Steven Federle  168. Stillwater High School Booster Club!  
40. blitzken  83. Marlee-I Mystic  126. Raivenne - Winter/Spring - List  169. Born In Water Benny Pen: Well Known Teacher  
41. Timoteo  84. Marbles in My Pocket  127. On Peter Constantin  
42. Tickly Turtle  85. jennifaye  128. William Leed  
43. Becky Sain  86. Tigerbrite  129. I Salute You, Friends!  

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22 comments:

Jingle Poetry At Olive Garden said...

welcome Back!

YEAH!!!!!

come on in and share.

Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said...

yes,

I am so happy to see this back.

Anonymous said...

I felt lost without you guys lol !!!! Glad you're back !

gautami tripathy said...

something went wrong. please remove my link at number 20!

Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said...

welcome,

I am getting out of town for my son's concert today,

will be BACK READING you.

best.

xoxox

Tigerbrite said...

Glad to see you back... and I didn't have to wait until Monday morning to post my effort. You are now up and running before the middle of the night here in Europe.

shail said...

I have linked a poem I wrote some time back :)

tigercity said...

yes, si, oui..
my offering comes under "lust".. not really a sin in my book, but then I didn't write the book ;)

JamieDedes said...

I didn't know you'd included a poem of mine here. How very kind. Thank you, Ji.

I'm just beginning to get back to a normal writing schedule. Been a long haul.

I'll play today, as much as I can.

Many blessings,
Jamie

JBinford-Bell said...

Nice to have you back.

Mia said...

Before Jingle poetry i simply exsisted, and this place not only saved me but fullfilled my every breathe.
being gone,letting everyone down hurt more than words can say.

this was my 1st goal after months of hospital food,take 2.
come back, live.

Luna

The Poet said...

Hello.
Good to be back among familiar friends. Is it a sin to be beautiful? You decide:
What Makes A Woman Beautiful

robin said...

glad to be here as usual...

Anonymous said...

So lovely to have you back! Have entered one old piece (that I happen to LOVE), but will try to write something new for this topic as well!!!!

Anjum Wasim Dar said...

Thank You -A Great Theme most inspiring...

Daydreamertoo said...

Thanks Jingle, you've made so many name changes, I'm not sure who is at what anymore. There's the Hyde Park one now too. Is that still Gooseberry?
Thanks for this prompt and good luck with it all.

Marbles in My Pocket said...

Glad to see JP back!

Jennifaye said...

The name changes kinda confuse me too. :) But I'm glad to participate again after a long time. Thanks Jingle!

Anonymous said...

Hi Jingle,
I haven't posted in a while, but seven deadly sins caught my muse.

What I posted is the third idea that popped up the first took on a life of its own and became very long.. the second was way to long, and this well I went a little squirrelly:-)

I hope your having agreat day!
Gerardine

Anonymous said...

amazing place to be.

Anonymous said...

Greeting dear poets and friends....
How are you?
Long time didnt join the picnic. I have been away from blog...
hope you enjoy to read my newest post

Sincerely,

C.Sasmita
(Journey To Eternity)

The Poet said...

Have we been spammed? There seems to be a lot of autobiographies here???