Friday, March 16, 2012

Friday Blog Review ~ Week 28 ~ L (Untitled moments)

This week we are highlighting another fine artist/poet/writer to her wonderful blog called Untitled Moments.

Untitledmoments - it just came to me... I sat down to write and decided that I was going to title all the moments that have been left on titled.
About The Author

A little about the writer, ~L

I am 28. Young, but feel like I have grown up too fast. I started this blog to express the way I feel as I deal with remembering a past long ago. I am determined to rise above the odds. I have begun a courageous battle and yes, at times I wonder if I’ll make it through to see victory, but I have a hope that I will be free from this one day.

The Blog

Untitled Moments

In this blog you will find nothing but my heart. I may be indirect at times but that’s okay, I think. You will see my passion for music. I hope you take the time to watch the videos I posted. Music has always been a huge part of my life.
I give many thanks to those who are helping me now. I could not do this with out you! I thank God for those He has put in my life to guide me along this narrow road.

Her Poetry

L has amazing talent her poetry,prose reach within the readers soul, her fight with her personal battles have made her a warrior and her faith in God is what makes her writing reach through the web sphere.

As this quotes reads, " when you complete your life's book of challenges in the world we live, always remember that your next challenge awaits you to begin, where you will end up in the next plane is not for you to choose."

L's poetry is a guide to the hidden answers that lays within you.  She has a gift that was given by God.

Note to L~ never stop giving up in life keep on progressing to the end.

Her Inspiration in her own words on her interview with JP at Olive Garden

What are your writing inspirations?

Well... I think healing is my inspirations. Writing what truly lies with in... Releasing the pain... I also like to write about my passions and beautiful nature.

Poem of her that truly captures the reader was this newer ones I have read on her blog.

Broken Melody

 Daddy’s little girl. Brings a smile to his day
Daddy’s little girl. Twirls about in the summer’s breeze
Daddy’s little girl. Dances under the willow trees
and sings, oh she sings
the world away

And when we’re apart her love follows me
Opening my heart with her magic key
Growing life from sun to sea
And nothing can take away the smile
she has for me
And nothing can take away
the love I have for she
Nothing can take away…
Daddy’s little girl
Daddy’s little girl.
Brings new meaning to his life
Daddy’s little girl.
Holds the stars in her eyes
Daddy’s little girl.
Makes him proud to watch her under lights
as she sings, oh she sings
and she sings – oh- she sings
the world away
Daddy’s little girl. Now broken crown and heart affray
Daddy’s little girl. Swirls about in the darkened dreams
Daddy’s little girl. Advances in her memories
and cries, oh she cries
the night away
And when we’re apart his pain follows me
Breaking my heart – this cannot be
Growing fears spun from a drunken spree
And everything you did that night
stole my smile away from me
And everything you did to me
took the love I had for thee
All the loving memories
you stole them away from me
The night you forgot that I…
I was Daddy’s little girl.
Daddy’s little girl.
Brings a new meaning to her life
Daddy’s little girl.
Holds the scars in her eyes
Daddy’s little girl.
Takes memories that she once held tight
and cries, oh she cries
and she cries – oh-  she cries
The world away
Daddy’s little girl. Sees the world in a whole new way
Daddy’s little girl. Stuck in a disgusted dismay
Daddy’s little girl. Doesn’t know what to do with this today
So she cries, and she cries
Oh she cries, how she cries
the world away.

 Silent Secret Screams


I want to scream aloud
all the pain that lies within
dig at my rejecting flesh
no longer can I withstand to inhabit this skin
I desperately grieve
for this agonizing energy to leave
pleading for it to flee!
be gone
go away
I want ‘me’ back
My body is in great agony!
How long must this go on?
I am falling – I am weak
I am sick of being incomplete
This fear won’t let my mind speak
Too much pain to even gasp
these silent screams too much for one to grasp
there is nothing left but to collapse
as tears now trail
their threats never prevail
This is Hell on earth
I am extremely certain
behind this curtain stages Satan’s lingering flames
His relentless games
and fear has set a blaze to every single nerve!
All as I am drug across another day
where the shards of glass continue to rip open my flesh
as I bath in the salty sea as it floods
with the  forever-spilling of my blood…
waiting for sharks to attack –
because as long as I’m a bleeding beating drum
I am burning in pain with excruciating silent screams
desperately trying to
break free from the silence
of unending sadness
and increasing madness

In desperation,

This was a wonderful segment to do as L has been apart of  both communities as an official. It was a great honor to have become one of her poet friends through Jingle Poetry & Gooseberry Garden.

I am Chimnese, the author of My Poetry & Writing hosting Friday Blog Review along with Robin, Write It .  Till next time & wishing you all good week ahead.