Friday, April 20, 2012

Friday Poetry Blog Review on Megzone by Leo, A Repost

When we write, we enter our own world. It is like we are in our own zone, where we can’t be disturbed. (I’m writing this, but I don’t know why she intended the “zone” in her name). Today, on Tuesday Reviews, I review a poet who’s known to many through Thursday Poets Rally and here through Potluck at times. Megzone is both blog name, and pen name at the space authored by Meghana, an Indian blogger.

Who’s the gal behind the poetry?
Meghana is a blogger from India. She’s a little of a lot of things, according to her introduction at the blog. She’s a little cute, a little alluring, a little innocent, a little devilish, a little mystic… she also says she has a little zeal, but I’d disagree. She has a lot of zeal. All those little things are part of her disposition; uniqueness and grace she says forms her core.

The look of the Zone…





The Megzone blog uses Spectrum, one of the recent updates to the Wordpress templates. Meghana has added a custom background, the light green color of which gives a nice soothing effect. She has used quite a lot of the widgets on offer, like recent posts and comments. In addition to that, she has also used the html widget to incorporate features like Flag Counter, Indiblogger Badge etc. There is also a subscription button which you can use to get email notification when she updates her blog.

Poetic Zone:
Meghana writes a lot of different styles of poetry, and at a very good frequency each month. The poetry is at times simple and simple in depth at times. Her free verse has a good flow to it, and rhyme as well. Many of her recent posts are haikus, and there has been a haiku about a haiku too. She's also into acrostics, sticking to the meaning of the theme quite well.

Meghana has been writing poetry for a while now, and has over 250 posts. From her recent works, I'd suggest the post Rendezvous for reading. She writes from her heart, and her poems are filled with emotion. She writes well at almost every emotion, though fantasy seems to be quite popular among her choices. The poems at times exude a calm feeling.

She writes for a variety of memes like Haiku Heights, Monday's Child, Thursday Poets Rally etc. Being a reader of her blog, I feel her poems for Monday's Child are easily her best works, the simple language and feeling she gives to them is exactly what a child might love to read. I think she writes good fiction too, but her focus is more on poetry than on prose.

Suggestions:
The template is fine, I think it is one of the better ones Wordpress has to offer. Do incorporate the Archive widget, and Tag Cloud into the sidebar. It'd be quite useful for readers to browse by category. I think you can get into more forms of poetry too because you seem to easily absorb the forms.  From the fiction I've read, you're quite capable of doing prose as well, so attempt them once in a while, if not often. Your frequency is not affecting the quality of posts, so good job.


Who am I?

I’m Leo; author of I Rhyme Without Reason, co-host of Review Tuesdays here at Jingle Poetry along with Someone is Special. Hope you enjoy reading about the blogs, and do go read them too. Megz, it was a pleasure to review your blog. I'll continue to read it regularly of course. Do let me know how you found it, or if I went wrong somewhere!

Thursday, April 19, 2012

Thursday Poetry Form Week 32: Grins...Creativity on Poetry...

Well, CC Champagne is back, welcoming all you lovely poets out there to a new week at The Gooseberry Garden. We are trying to find out more about inspiring poetry forms (and learn right along with you) on Thursdays here in The Gooseberry Garden. So pull up a lawn chair and enjoy they golden glow of autumn with us as we take a look at something you have (possibly) never heard of before.

For some reason the idea of writing a spell appeals to me... It usually has a rhythm, a recurring phrase and a mystic feel. I thought that rhyming a spell should be easy enough, and with the enormous popularity of J.K. Rawling's Harry Potter as well as various TV-series and films over the past decade, anything witch and spell related has become rather trendy lately (or maybe I just want to believe that because it makes my life easier?). Therefore, as a follow up to the more educational (and very well explained) Poetry for Dummies Post last week, I decided to have a look at one of the old versions of spells and chants out there.

A Carmen is not just the name of an opera (or an opéra comique by Georges Bizet if Wikipedia is to be believed), it is also the name of a Poetry Form with roots in ancient Rome.

Originally named after the Roman Goddess Carmenta, the Goddess of childbirth and prophecy, a Carmen is a verse which is, in its' proper sense an spell or a prayer to the Goddess. Originally these Carmens (some recorded by Plutarch and Virgil) were chanted, which implies a need for rhythm, but there seems to be no specified meter required to write a Carmen. The number three does hold some relevance though, and a certain phrase is often repeated three times.

The freedom of not having to count syllables, of course, suits me to the tee and allows me the liberty of using the opening witch scene in Shakespeare's Macbeth as an example (although the form might not be considered traditionally correct for a Carmen):

Thrice and once the hedge-pig whined.
Thrice the brinded cat hath mew'd.
Harpier cries 'Tis time, 'tis time.
Round about the cauldron go;
In the poison'd entrails throw.
Toad, that under cold stone
Days and nights has thirty-one
Swelter'd venom sleeping got,
Boil thou first i' the charmed pot.
Double, double toil and trouble;
Fire burn, and cauldron bubble.

Or even the more popular childrens' rhyme (origin unknown):

Rain, rain go away! Come again some other day!

What would a modern day Carmen sound like? What kind of spells or chants would you wish to cast? And if you were brewing a potion, what modern ingredients would you use? Perhaps you wish to enchant an object? Any efforts are more than welcome at the Poetry Picnic!


*cheers*

Sunday, April 15, 2012

Poetry Picnic Week 31: Nature, Color, and Rainbow...

When Magic Comes 2 Impress by Jingle  


On top of a hill,
A figure under the tree, sitting still,
His cheeks glow
as grasses bends below.
.
To freeze the moment
which will not last,
It’s such a hard task
2 ask.
.
Here comes a dog’s bark
from the nearby park,
The bumble bee’s hum
suggests a beehive near the farm.
.
One has to hold one’s breath
2 stop time,
when magic tries to impress,
what a sweet crime.



Absorbing It All by Kavita  


sweet scents titillate
electric hued butterflies
flirtatious blooms call

lingering crisp chills
from a fading winter night
dew perches on blades

young birds awaken
whistling harmless gentle tunes
a lazy oak yawns

fresh moments blossom
into days of springy joy
eyes hungry for more

pollen’s in the air
time for allergic despair
aacchhooo!!!! Scusi please… 






Colors of Nature by Olivia  


Pick up a rainbow and a few metallic shades:
The Sun takes from Red to Yellow,
The Sky that forms the backdrop-
From Blue till Violet,
Sometimes, it reaches till Red.

The nature takes the shades of Green-
Also, Brown- that’s obtained when all colors are mixed.
That all colors when absorbed produce Black,
And when reflected, form White,
is not “logic”, but a Science.

Look above yourself-
Golden is Sun’s fiery rays,
Silvery is the cool Moonlight.
The Stars are the Gemstones precious,
Diamonds and all the colored ones.

The meteors maybe the minerals-
The shooting ones, the white metals..
The burning ones- the yellow metalloid;
Asteroids the other ores,
The Comets maybe the shining crystals!!

Birds, Butterflies, Worms, Flowers-
Take all colors and shades possible..
Humans although take from beige to dark brown,
Seldom shows the gravity of containing all within themselves-
They appear to be hollow’ ones devoid of any color at all!!




Black Beauty by bendedspoon  


Black  is the coal which provides heat
Black is the night where one can see the beauty of the stars
Black is the pencil lead which first introduced me to art of handwriting
Black is the tea that soothes me
Black are the olives in the numnum pizza
Black are my eyes which can see the good in you.



Stones Weathered Smooth by booguloo  

Stones weathered smooth by water and sand
One slips away and falls from your hand
Trying again it slips away from your clasp
Like my bloody heart that’s hard to grasp

The blood from my last piercing’s coat my heart
Watch your fingers I’ll lock tight the gate to start
Your first time was free, now the key you must find
Throwing it into my whirlpool you dive in blind

The end of the whirlpool you fall into bed
Picking up your pen to write what’s in your head
You lay down the pen and yourself back to sleep
Looking for stones weathered smooth as you dream deep




Methods of Submissions:

Share your work using InLinkz below, and leave a comment in case it is your first time!  It would be super great if you could link back to us on your blog.

Weekly poetry collection starts on Sunday, at 8pm, and will stay open until Sunday, 8pm, 7 days for you to share your talent with us!



Theme for next week?

Week 32 theme will be:  Visit twitter.com online, open an account for your blog if you don’t have one yet, find any headline or twitter contents that interest you and write a poem or prose starting with the twit or with first sentence, have fun! http://twitter.com

Keep up the excellence.
Hope to see you share then!

Happy Poetry Picnic! Enjoy Spring Time!



Friday, April 13, 2012

Thursday Poetry form Week 31

Hello Everyone!

I am Ava of http://www.verseinanutshell.wordpress.com/
and I am co-writing with CC Champagne. I will write this article every other week. I am very excited to begin this writing job. I am not much of a master of poetic forms so hopefully this will be a learning experience for both you, the reader, and me, the writer. So sit back, relax and enjoy the show. Comments are EXTREMELY welcome!


This week we are going to talk about iambic pentameter. This is a good introductory lesson because it is used very frequently. So before you can start writing like Shakespeare, you will have to learn to use iambic pentameter. It may seem a little intimidating at first, but eventually it will be as easy as breathing. (Okay, maybe not that easy, but you will be use iambic pentameter correctly.)


Iambic pentameter is a commonly used metrical line in both traditional verse and verse drama. The term "iambic pentameter" describes the particular rhythm that the line creates. That rhythm is effectively measured in small groups of syllables called feet. The word "iambic" describes the type of foot that is being used which, in English, is an unstressed syllable followed by a stressed syllable. The word "pentameter" means that there are five of these feet.


When two syllables are arranged in a pattern of unstressed syllable followed by a stressed syllable this line is called iambic. The English word "trapeze" is a good example because the emphasis is on the second syllable (tra-PEZE) as opposed to (TRA- peze). Another simple example is the human heart beat. The duh-DUM of the heartbeat is probably the most common and the easiest to understand. Here is a example of a poem that use iambic pentameter. This poem is by John Donne:


Batter my heart three-personed God, for you
As yet, but knock, breathe, shine and seek to mend,

That I may rise and stand o'er throw me and bend,

You force to break, blow, burn and make me new.


So now you know how to use iambic pentameter. Hopefully this was enlightening for you. Once again, comments are warmly welcomed. I only want to get better. I hope you feel inspired!


Sunday, April 8, 2012

Poetry Picnic Week 30: Doubts, Fears, Inhibitions and Hesitations


Happy (Belated) Birthday To Poets In Our community! 

April 2, Jaymie at Jaymie
April 7, Jackie Chan
April 10th. Shail, Muse, Verse n' You
April 16:Gracefulglider:  gracefulglider
April 28, Shakira at Shakira


We (Olivia and Kavita) delightedly welcome you again to Poetry Potluck or April Picnic Week 30, 
This week we are up with "Doubts, Fears, Inhibitions and Hesitations"... brrrr.... Come on, will ya? Join us..and fight this fear together!!

Register yourself (with your name and the link to your potluck entry) using InLinkz below, and leave a comment with a pointer to your post! It would be great if you could link back to us on your blog!!! Once you are done with this, visit as many your peers as possible, read their entries, comment, AND ENJOY!!! Of course, you can always submit any poem of your choice as well...

Remember: Every week, InLinkz will be up on Sunday, at 2pm (CDT), and will stay open till next Sunday, 2pm (CDT). So you will have an entire week to share your poem with us...COOL huh?!! Also, if you aren't new to Poetry Picnic or Potluck, please note that we may not send you weekly reminders. So, it would be awesome if you could add us to your Blogroll or Favorites, so that you can stay updated with the happenings on our site!!

Flash Forward!! Whheewww...having fought our inhibitions, let's go out and enjoy some "Color, Spring and Rainbow"!! Let's celebrate Spring..!! That's next week ofcourse! So you have one entire week to prepare your poem for this theme.. :) And if you are unable to submit a poem ON the theme, relax... Send in an older poem you would love to share with us...

And now, LET'S GET STARTED with this week's potluck!!!! Enjoy the VIDEO here and write on... Thanks for joining in and supporting your fellow poets here at OUR favorite Poetry Potluck!!!
  


"Shackled"
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(by Sam/Cerca Trova)
I may
Yet I don't
I can
Yet I won't
Is it
Fear of change
That holds me back
Or faith in the future
That I lack
Is it
My haunting Doubts
Shadows of failures
I drag along
From the past
Is it
My own Inhibitions
The inner "No"
That halts me
From taking Decisions
Is it
The darkened road ahead
An unknown destination
A journey
Without an end
If only
I could know
I Want
To let go
I long to break free
Be able to flee
These towering walls
Of my imprisoning
Hesitations.
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Thank you, Sam, for your contribution poem... we are so honored!!




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